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With love to all the kissing fests and memes that paved the way ...




Jack/Daniel Kissathon

No rules, no schedule, no sign-ups, just kisses!


first kisses dirty kisses hot kisses reunion kisses old-married-couple kisses chaste kisses aggressive kisses soft-touch-of-lips kisses porntastic kisses stolen kisses rough kisses sweet kisses private kisses tonsil-sucking kisses soft kisses sweaty kisses shmoopy kisses shower kisses tender kisses angsty kisses loooong kisses surprise kisses public kisses last kisses


Here's the list of ficlets.

Not the First Kiss

Date: 2007-09-25 07:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starglyph.livejournal.com
Jack’s eyes closed and he sighed.

Daniel felt the warm breath on his lips. Inhaled it into his mouth. He kissed the firm lips beneath his own and drew the tip of his tongue along across the bottom one, tasting the wetness. He dusted small kisses across Jack’s face, the closed eyes, that one scarred eyebrow that Jack accused him of having a kink for. He again pressed his lips to Jack’s.

“We must leave now, Daniel Jackson. I will carry him.”

Daniel stumbled when he tried to stand. From his lips, Daniel licked the blood from their last kiss.


(Huh. That turned out at exactly 100 words and is the first thing I’ve written in months.)

Not the first fb :-)

Date: 2007-09-25 07:54 pm (UTC)
paian: blank white (undone by vardataurwen)
From: [personal profile] paian
... but still the first Kissathon kiss! and it's a doozy.

Wo -- intense way to start things off and get back into the writing groove! And a perfect 100-worder too. Awesome on all counts.

I love the effect Teal'c's statement has. I was totally jarred because I thought I was in a private Daniel/Jack scene, and there's this unmistakable Teal'c dialogue ... and then what Teal'c is saying comes through, and gets processed as I'm reading the next sentence, so by the last sentence I'm all poleaxed. Very cool effect on the reader, and cool re-creation of the effect on Daniel, who's probably pretty jarred himself. Yow.

And I'm re-posting this comment to switch icons, for some kind of re-posting record here. *g*

... but still the first Kissathon kiss!

Date: 2007-09-25 08:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starglyph.livejournal.com
I’m in the process of editing something much lighter, but it keeps getting sad. So I decided to vent some of it here. I was wary of starting off with something non-smutty, *g* but thought the event and the title worked so well for a first fic here....

Very glad you liked the way it evolved. I so love it when stuff writes itself. Thank you for the lovely, detailed fb. You have a wonderful way of deconstructing fic that always makes me go “Wow. I like it even more, now.”

Re: ... but still the first Kissathon kiss!

Date: 2007-09-29 03:47 pm (UTC)
paian: blank white (daniel glowy)
From: [personal profile] paian
Non-smutty is great, seriously -- one thing I love about kissing memes is that they can totally run the gamut of ratings and moods. And that you can write as short or long as you like, and as many as you like. ;-)

It's gloriously wonderful when stuff writes itself, and this really was a great opener. I have a cleverness/metafic kink and you're so good at hitting it. *g*

Glad to hear about the other thing you're editing, too!

Re: ... but still the first Kissathon kiss!

Date: 2007-09-30 07:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starglyph.livejournal.com
I have a cleverness/metafic kink and you're so good at hitting it.

*blushes*

Oh my! I'll do my best to hit your spot when I can! After all, we know that half the fun is another person's pleasure. ;-D

(I'm writing again! You got me going!) *g*

Re: ... but still the first Kissathon kiss!

Date: 2007-09-30 04:47 pm (UTC)
paian: blank white (whoo)
From: [personal profile] paian
(I'm writing again! You got me going!)

Yessss! ::pumps fist::

Re: Not the First Kiss

Date: 2007-09-25 08:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melayneseahawk.livejournal.com
(Following the migration...)

Ah, no! *is sad* But lovely.

Re: Not the First Kiss

Date: 2007-09-25 08:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starglyph.livejournal.com
*is sad, too* Thank you. (On all counts!) :)

Re: Not the First Kiss

Date: 2007-09-25 11:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msbeata.livejournal.com
Your timing is fantastic. I was reading the post with the list of kisses and when I got to 'last kisses' I thought 'oh no, that would be so sad'. So then I'm reading yours and thinking it was kinda hot when suddenly - it was a last kiss. Noooooo! //flails//

You're good.

Re: Not the First Kiss

Date: 2007-09-26 12:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starglyph.livejournal.com
I don't know if it was the order [livejournal.com profile] paian put them in, or my thoughts on 'last kiss' in so many songs. I only knew I wanted it to end with those two words -- which was in contrast to being the first post -- hence the title.

Lovely feedback. Thank you!

Re: Not the First Kiss

Date: 2007-09-28 10:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jd-junkie.livejournal.com
Noooooooo!!
Beautifully done but, you know, sob.
*flails and reaches for Kleenex*

Re: Not the First Kiss

Date: 2007-09-28 02:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starglyph.livejournal.com
Sorry. I was just having one of those days and took it out on them.

Thank you.

*hugs you and borrows a Kleenex*

Re: Not the First Kiss

Date: 2007-10-01 01:38 am (UTC)
sid: (J/D battlefield)
From: [personal profile] sid
Oh, you surprised me and broke my heart into tiny bitty pieces!

Go you!

I wrote a drabble recently that came out to exactly 100 words right off the bat (or right out of the gate *g*), but then I started to tweak it, so it didn't really count, but I know what a good feeling that is!

Re: Not the First Kiss

Date: 2007-10-01 04:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starglyph.livejournal.com
Yay! And sorry! ;-)

And thanks!

It gets to the point you can eyeball a fic and guess the word count. It wasn't intended to be a drabble, but I just checked the count out of curiosity. right out of the gate lol

(Perfect icon!)

Re: Not the First Kiss

Date: 2007-10-01 05:41 pm (UTC)
sid: (J/D battlefield)
From: [personal profile] sid
You like this icon? You want to take it? Feel free!

I MADE THAT ICON!

:-D

Re: Not the First Kiss

Date: 2007-10-01 09:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starglyph.livejournal.com
Go you! Maybe I will! :) I've decided to go icon hunting, soon one of these days.

Re: Not the First Kiss

Date: 2007-10-06 07:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moonshayde.livejournal.com
Wow that was awesome and so sad.

Re: Not the First Kiss

Date: 2007-10-08 06:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starglyph.livejournal.com
Thank you! It was quite different for me, so I really appreciate the feedback. :)

Re: Not the First Kiss

Date: 2007-10-08 06:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starglyph.livejournal.com
Thanks! They are both of those, and more. ;-)

Re: Not the First Kiss

Date: 2007-10-08 12:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkness4light.livejournal.com
Oh wow! Way to poleaxe your audience! so amazingly sweet too! Wow.
Jen

Re: Not the First Kiss

Date: 2007-10-08 06:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starglyph.livejournal.com
Thank you! I sort of surprised myself with this one. :)

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