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With love to all the kissing fests and memes that paved the way ...

Jack/Daniel Kissathon

No rules, no schedule, no sign-ups, just kisses!

first kisses dirty kisses hot kisses reunion kisses old-married-couple kisses chaste kisses aggressive kisses soft-touch-of-lips kisses porntastic kisses stolen kisses rough kisses sweet kisses private kisses tonsil-sucking kisses soft kisses sweaty kisses shmoopy kisses shower kisses tender kisses angsty kisses loooong kisses surprise kisses public kisses last kisses

Here's the list of ficlets.

Joined, 2/2

Date: 2007-11-21 03:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] entrenous.livejournal.com
Jack’s lips parted and he let his eyelids shutter, leaning forward inches that felt like miles, he felt their lips brush together. He felt the strange stirring in his gut, an echo of thought, not sure if it was his own or Alatheia’s, and tried not to think about the symbiote unlatching herself from his spinal column. But the moist slide of Daniel’s lips on his own, moving and warm, caressing, opening him, gave him focus, and he threw everything into this kiss, into this moment—and God, was that actually tongue, or was that Alatheia passing just now? But then he knew Daniel was kissing him, kissing him desperately, tongue sliding against his, and Jack responded, grabbing Daniel’s shoulders, and pressed into him harder, in front of God and everyone, thankful his back was to their audience, and chanting to himself, Christ, don’t moan, don’t moan, do not moan...

He was afraid he would gag when Alatheia passed from his mouth to Daniel’s, but he didn’t. Certainly he was aware of the transfer, but the whole process wasn’t nearly as traumatic as he thought it would be.

Daniel’s lips lingered a moment on Jack’s, as long as possible without arousing suspicion...well, anymore than they had already aroused in their audience, he was sure. At least that was the only thing that managed to get aroused. Jack was pretty sure Alatheia was to thank for that. Not because she’d particularly had command of all his bodily functions just then, but just because, eww—the whole idea of the process creeped him out. But even though she was fully within Daniel now, Daniel’s lips still slid over his, straining to keep this contact between them for as long as possible. This kiss was just for Jack.

It could have gone on forever. It should have. But their lips parted and they both looked down. Daniel’s eyes fluttered open, and he blushed beautifully.

Jack stared breathless at Daniel a moment, feeling as if the air was stolen from his lungs. He forced himself to breathe, cleared his throat, then said, “Wouldn’t be too much to ask you to write this time, would it?”

Daniel smiled. “I’ll be back before you even miss me,” he said.

“I doubt that.” Jack’s voice broke on the last and he swallowed hard. He squeezed Daniel’s shoulder affectionately, one last time, and finally let him go.

Daniel turned to Jacob. He did the ‘Tok’ra nod,’ as Jack thought of it, and Alatheia spoke: “I am ready.” Jacob walked up the ramp to join them on the platform, motioned to Daniel, or Alatheia, or whomever, to pass through the Stargate.

Daniel looked back just for a moment at Jack, a look that said everything that he couldn’t right now. Alatheia had given him her word—Jack just hoped that was enough.

Jack nodded and smiled, a small smile just for Daniel, and then Daniel turned and walked into the light without him once more.

Re: Joined, 2/2

Date: 2007-11-21 04:47 pm (UTC)
paian: Jack and Daniel, caption 'come what may' (jd come what may)
From: [personal profile] paian
What a great scenario! I really like Alatheia, and I'm so sorry for her imminent loss. Love Jack's fond, admiring thought about what a great team she and Daniel will make, and I especially love the indicator embedded in there of his mental process in coming to see her as a person: that snake, that Tok’ra—Alatheia. (Plus I really like that she's characterized as female and stays female through two male hosts. I still believe that Jolinar was male, despite the way the show flip-flopped on that, and that Selmak was female, inasmuch as Tok'ra have gender as a human would conceive of it, which is two whole other questions.) The last clause gives me the strongest feeling of 'man, they have got to stop doing that' -- but in a hopeful way, like maybe in this 'verse they soon will. Makes me want to slot this fic in where 'Meridian' and 'Abyss' go. I also like the sense of jeopardy -- there's no guarantee that things will turn out OK, and Jack's worry comes through really nicely. Also his fundamental revulsion at the whole process, even tho he's suppressing it because he believes in what they're doing -- his responses to the kiss mostly supersede it, but not completely. (And it handily saved him from the embarrassment of getting hard. :-))

And, of course, the kiss! Such a wonderful kiss! And I love the exchange they have afterwards -- very Them, and wonderfully loaded with warmth and significance. This hits the public!display!kink button in the sweetest way, with so much going on in private between them, and the desperate attempt to keep the onlookers from seeing it. And the physical transfer of the symbiote has this fascinating sexuality to it without being played for the kink factor. I really like the way you wrote Jack's awareness of what's happening inside his body as the symbiote detaches and leaves him. Mentioning that he expected it to be gagging and it wasn't deals with the reader's assumptions about how that would feel, too.

And now my mind is awhirl with the possibilities for when Daniel comes back -- how much of Jack's interior life will become available to Daniel through Alatheia, how much of it he can absorb while they're busy with their mission, and how that will affect his relationship with Jack, who won't have an equivalent knowledge of Daniel ... I'm wanting something to go wrong on the mission so that Jack has to go take Alatheia back before she dies ... which means I extra loved this, because the story doesn't end when the fic does, but dances off into all kinds of imaginary futures, and I'm babbling now and will stop. Really enjoyed this. *g*

Re: Joined, 2/2

Date: 2007-11-22 01:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] entrenous.livejournal.com
Wow, thank you for the excellent feedback! I was worried about this one. I wrote it really late at night and almost didn't post it because it is a bit weird, and dark, and um...weird. But I figured, what the hell, I stayed up 'till 4 in the morning finishing it, might as well.

In retrospect, I never gave much thought to Jolinar's gender. I'll have to go back and watch some of those episodes. I was positive Selmak was female, though, and I liked the idea of a kind of "two-spirit," almost 3rd gender, but you're right--gender doesn't seem to really matter to the Tok'ra anyway.

I didn't have any specific period in mind for this, and now I'm looking at it again, it could be A/U, or a 'replacement' for Meridian. I've been thinking about what'll happen, too, even though most of my stuff is relatively 'plot lite' these days and this is certainly rife with plot-y goodness. Still, the muse does what it will, and maybe I'll revisit this one day, because I can't resist making any character suffer as much as possible before they get their happily-ever-after.

I'm glad you like Alatheia. Didn't wanna give too much info there, but she was essentially the Greek goddess of truth and sincerity (doncha love how they had a GOD for that?), and figured what the hell--if the Goa'uld can rip off ancient deities, so can the Tok'ra.

(And would someone explain to me why "Tok'ra" is spelled with a glottal stop when the stupid word already has one built in?)

Anyway, Happy Thanksgiving and thank you again. :)

Re: Joined, 2/2

Date: 2007-11-21 10:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] seanchaidh.livejournal.com
Aw, sweet! Creepy, mildly creepy, but sweet. I like that, "Tok'ra nod." Hmm. I might have to borrow it at some point...? :)

Re: Joined, 2/2

Date: 2007-11-22 01:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] entrenous.livejournal.com
Be my guest! :) I'm glad you liked it, 'cause yeah, I knew it was creepy and kinda gross and I wasn't sure if it would fly or sink like a box of rocks. I'm glad it seems to have gotten the reaction I was going for, though. :) Thanks! And Happy Thanksgiving.

Re: Joined, 2/2

Date: 2007-11-23 01:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] seanchaidh.livejournal.com
I appreciate the wishes, but I'm Canadian -- it's just another day here. A day with snow, albeit.

Re: Joined, 2/2

Date: 2007-11-22 02:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melayneseahawk.livejournal.com
Slightly creepy, but lovely all the same. I like Alatheia, though.

Re: Joined, 2/2

Date: 2007-11-22 01:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] entrenous.livejournal.com
Hee, I liked her too, 'cause two tragic figures just aren't enough, ya know? :D I apologize for creeping ya out, but I'm glad you liked it nonetheless.

Re: Joined, 2/2

Date: 2007-11-22 01:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jd-junkie.livejournal.com
This is great. The story can go off in so many directions from here. A whole bundle of "what ifs".
And, like everyone else, I love Alatheia too.
Nice work. :-)

Re: Joined, 2/2

Date: 2007-11-26 12:40 am (UTC)
sid: (J/D thisclose)
From: [personal profile] sid
Oh, not really creepy! Looking at the snake would be creepy, but having the transfer take place smoothly, painlessly and invisibly isn't so very bad. :-)

I loved Jack telling himself not to moan, and Daniel clinging to the kiss after Alatheia was already inside him, and Daniel blushing and Jack's voice breaking...*sigh*

Re: Joined, 2/2

Date: 2007-12-01 03:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tresa-cho.livejournal.com
Fwee! This was wonderful. All of yours are quite brilliant. *snuggles*

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