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With love to all the kissing fests and memes that paved the way ...

Jack/Daniel Kissathon

No rules, no schedule, no sign-ups, just kisses!

first kisses dirty kisses hot kisses reunion kisses old-married-couple kisses chaste kisses aggressive kisses soft-touch-of-lips kisses porntastic kisses stolen kisses rough kisses sweet kisses private kisses tonsil-sucking kisses soft kisses sweaty kisses shmoopy kisses shower kisses tender kisses angsty kisses loooong kisses surprise kisses public kisses last kisses

Here's the list of ficlets.

Not the First Kiss

Date: 2007-09-25 07:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starglyph.livejournal.com
Jack’s eyes closed and he sighed.

Daniel felt the warm breath on his lips. Inhaled it into his mouth. He kissed the firm lips beneath his own and drew the tip of his tongue along across the bottom one, tasting the wetness. He dusted small kisses across Jack’s face, the closed eyes, that one scarred eyebrow that Jack accused him of having a kink for. He again pressed his lips to Jack’s.

“We must leave now, Daniel Jackson. I will carry him.”

Daniel stumbled when he tried to stand. From his lips, Daniel licked the blood from their last kiss.

(Huh. That turned out at exactly 100 words and is the first thing I’ve written in months.)

Not the first fb :-)

Date: 2007-09-25 07:54 pm (UTC)
paian: blank white (undone by vardataurwen)
From: [personal profile] paian
... but still the first Kissathon kiss! and it's a doozy.

Wo -- intense way to start things off and get back into the writing groove! And a perfect 100-worder too. Awesome on all counts.

I love the effect Teal'c's statement has. I was totally jarred because I thought I was in a private Daniel/Jack scene, and there's this unmistakable Teal'c dialogue ... and then what Teal'c is saying comes through, and gets processed as I'm reading the next sentence, so by the last sentence I'm all poleaxed. Very cool effect on the reader, and cool re-creation of the effect on Daniel, who's probably pretty jarred himself. Yow.

And I'm re-posting this comment to switch icons, for some kind of re-posting record here. *g*

Re: Not the First Kiss

Date: 2007-09-25 08:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melayneseahawk.livejournal.com
(Following the migration...)

Ah, no! *is sad* But lovely.

... but still the first Kissathon kiss!

Date: 2007-09-25 08:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starglyph.livejournal.com
I’m in the process of editing something much lighter, but it keeps getting sad. So I decided to vent some of it here. I was wary of starting off with something non-smutty, *g* but thought the event and the title worked so well for a first fic here....

Very glad you liked the way it evolved. I so love it when stuff writes itself. Thank you for the lovely, detailed fb. You have a wonderful way of deconstructing fic that always makes me go “Wow. I like it even more, now.”

Re: Not the First Kiss

Date: 2007-09-25 08:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starglyph.livejournal.com
*is sad, too* Thank you. (On all counts!) :)

Re: Not the First Kiss

Date: 2007-09-25 11:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msbeata.livejournal.com
Your timing is fantastic. I was reading the post with the list of kisses and when I got to 'last kisses' I thought 'oh no, that would be so sad'. So then I'm reading yours and thinking it was kinda hot when suddenly - it was a last kiss. Noooooo! //flails//

You're good.

Re: Not the First Kiss

Date: 2007-09-26 12:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starglyph.livejournal.com
I don't know if it was the order [livejournal.com profile] paian put them in, or my thoughts on 'last kiss' in so many songs. I only knew I wanted it to end with those two words -- which was in contrast to being the first post -- hence the title.

Lovely feedback. Thank you!


Date: 2007-09-26 02:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melayneseahawk.livejournal.com
"For the last time, Jack, stop touching things!"

"Ooh, someone's pissy today," Jack said, putting down the rock he'd been playing with and stuffing his hands in his pockets.

"Pissy?" Daniel asked incredulously. "Pissy?! You invade my office, keep me from working, mess with priceless artifacts, but when I tell you to stop, I'm pissy?"

"Yup," Jack said, shit-eating grin firmly in place. "Pissy."

"Arg!" Daniel stomped out from behind the desk and over to Jack, close enough that their chests were almost touching. "You infuriating, insufferably ass! You, you -- " He grabbed Jack's lapels and the next thing Jack knew they were kissing, a battle of teeth and tongues. Jack brought his arms up around Daniel's back and the kiss gentled, becoming softer and slower.

Daniel's death grip on Jack's lapels loosened and his finger slipped up Jack's neck to tangle in his hair. He made a soft sound against Jack's lips and then pulled back for air. "Pissy?" Jack asked, smirking.

"Ass," Daniel said, reeling Jack in for another kiss.

Re: Pissy

Date: 2007-09-26 10:17 pm (UTC)
paian: blank white (kiss)
From: [personal profile] paian
Awwww! Such a sweet kiss, and so quintessentially Them. :-) :-)

Re: Pissy

Date: 2007-09-26 10:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melayneseahawk.livejournal.com
That was the goal. And thank you. :)

Re: Pissy

Date: 2007-09-27 02:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starglyph.livejournal.com
Hey! No fair stealing from SG-1 footage on the cutting room floor. ;-)

Nicely done!

Re: Pissy

Date: 2007-09-27 02:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melayneseahawk.livejournal.com
I never said I owned them. :P I just write it like I see it.

Re: Not the First Kiss

Date: 2007-09-28 10:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jd-junkie.livejournal.com
Beautifully done but, you know, sob.
*flails and reaches for Kleenex*

Re: Pissy

Date: 2007-09-28 10:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jd-junkie.livejournal.com
Yep. So them. Nicely done. :-))

Kiss kiss kiss (kiss)

Date: 2007-09-28 11:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jd-junkie.livejournal.com
Jack wasn’t entirely sure what it was that had make Daniel come like that. Whatever it was, he wanted to bottle it for future use.

Sweat was cooling on them both, adding a delicious shiver to the ongoing aftershocks. The salt drops were running in rivulets down Daniel’s back and Jack watched in fascination as each one hurdled the nobbles of his spine.

He leaned down to run a warm, hungry tongue up Daniel’s beautiful, broad back, licking the salt away.

Daniel was still convulsing; he couldn’t keep still.

Jack nuzzled up into the sweaty nape and whispered, “Hey, turn over I wanna see you.”

Breathing heavily, Daniel shifted and Jack finally got to look at him; his eyes were wild, restless. He turned his head away. Daniel seemed elsewhere, unable to relax, to give himself to the peace that usually followed the loving.

“Hey,” Jack said again, cupping Daniel’s head in his hand. “It’s okay. Ssshhh. It’s okay.”

Still restless, still distracted, Daniel nuzzled hard into Jack’s warm palm. Jack gasped slightly as a tongue gingerly lapped at his hand. The tentative strokes became bolder until Daniel finally pulled Jack’s hand away, and eyes closed, kissed each fingertip softly, achingly tenderly, sucking each finger into his mouth firmly afterwards.

Tiny high-pitched, desperate sounds escaped Daniel’s lips with each kiss; one, two, three, four. Then he kissed Jack’s palm again, those full, swollen lips moving firmly, telling him in every way that he loved him, needed him, needed this, before returning the hand to cradle his face. He seemed to begin to calm. Finally.

Jack swallowed hard. Oh yeah, he wanted to bottle it …

Re: Pissy

Date: 2007-09-28 12:05 pm (UTC)

Re: Kiss kiss kiss (kiss)

Date: 2007-09-28 12:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melayneseahawk.livejournal.com

Lovely way to start my morning.

Re: Kiss kiss kiss (kiss)

Date: 2007-09-28 01:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jd-junkie.livejournal.com
Thanks! Hope the day carries on in a similarly enjoyable vein. :-)

Re: Kiss kiss kiss (kiss)

Date: 2007-09-28 02:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starglyph.livejournal.com
Beautiful descriptions!

And guh! I kind of know how Daniel's feeling. ;-)

Re: Not the First Kiss

Date: 2007-09-28 02:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starglyph.livejournal.com
Sorry. I was just having one of those days and took it out on them.

Thank you.

*hugs you and borrows a Kleenex*

Date: 2007-09-28 02:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] secondalto.livejournal.com
They stood side by side as the village leader spouted on and on. Jack's hands rested on his gun, eyes flicking over to Daniel who was attentive to the speech being given. Sam and Teal'c were jus behind them, the rest of the village gathered around them. Jack felt Daniel's eyes on him and he realized the leader had finished speaking.

"Jack, we have to...," Daniel said, the implication clear.


His hands moved from his weapon to frame Daniel's face. Daniel's eyes gleamed and a small smile played across his lips. Jack replied with a grin of his own before kissing Daniel.

No matter how many times they went through this, it always gave Jack a thrill. Kissing Daniel in public offworld when he couldn't at home.... His kiss went from soft and gentle to hard and passionate as Daniel pulled him closer.


They broke apart, turning to Sam who was blushing. Teal'c seemed to be smiling as only he could. Daniel licked his lips and said something to the leader who responded.

"So do we have a treaty?" Jack asked.

"We do," Daniel said. "He, uh, wishes us a long and happy life."

Jack just grinned some more before putting his cap back on and gesturing to his team.

"Let's go home, kids."

They started back towards the 'gate. Daniel caught Jack's attention, giving him a look that promised much for when they got back home.

Re: Pissy

Date: 2007-09-28 03:22 pm (UTC)
theemdash: (SG-1 Jack/Daniel Humor)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
*gigglefits* Lovely. Absolutely lovely.

I need to write some kissing fics....

Date: 2007-09-28 03:25 pm (UTC)
theemdash: (SG-1 Jack/Daniel Boyfriends)
From: [personal profile] theemdash
*snickers* Brings new meaning to the phrase "sealed with a kiss."

Re: Pissy

Date: 2007-09-28 04:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melayneseahawk.livejournal.com
Yes! You do!

Re: Kiss kiss kiss (kiss)

Date: 2007-09-28 04:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jd-junkie.livejournal.com
Guh is the word for your icon, too. Ain't nothin' like a satiated Daniel. :-) *thud*
Thanks for commenting. :-)

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