Call for prompt sentences ...

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... for a Jack/Daniel porn tree!

I'm going to post the start of a porn-battle-style porn tree in midweek, and I can use as many smutty or sensuous or suggestive sentences as I can get between now and Wednesday (Smut Day!) at about midday U.S. Pacific time.

In the Porn Battle, you provide show, pairing, and a prompt word. Here we have the show and pairing -- they're all Stargate SG-1, Jack/Daniel (or Daniel/Jack *g*). So here I'm looking for full sentences to inspire ficlets. Once the prompts are posted, it'll be like the porn battle -- grab a prompt, write a fic that fits in one 4300-character comment, and post it as a reply to the prompts entry -- but writers will also have the option of taking any phrase or sentence from another comment response and writing a new comment fic around that.

Here are some sample sentences (but the real prompts can be as explicit as you like):

"You want me to what?"

Jack ran the tip of his index finger down the sweat-pooled valley of Daniel's spine.

Daniel licked his lips.

It was that dark, wicked twitch of smile that killed him every time.

Bits of dialogue, unspecific "he"s, short-and-simple, long-and-complex, angsty-and-serious, funny-and-punchy, raunchy and filthy, shmoopy and sweet -- as long as it's just one sentence. IP logging is off and anonymous commenting is enabled. (I will use the Screen button if it becomes necessary, but I don't expect it to.)

Submit as many sentences as you like -- the more the better! On Wednesday afternoon I'll compile them into a prompt post, and the comment-tree not-necessarily-drabbles porn battle shall begin. :-)

ETA: Prompts are now closed, because the commentpornathonaganza is about to begin. Thanks to everyone for all the great prompts!

Comments

[slb44.livejournal.com]

Daniel still wasn't sure what happened on that ship but he felt compelled to reach out to Jack and force some sort of resolution to their ongoing dilemma.

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Very cool -- thanks so much!

[(Anonymous)]

Jack wondered if Daniel knew what he was doing.

Daniel struggles not to move.

He has no idea what's going to happen next.

He opens his mouth and waits, ready.

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"You don't come until I say you can."

After a long, boring day of paperwork, it was the last thing Jack expected to see when he opened his front door.

"So, Daniel...what's in the box?"

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He was naked, and he wasn't quite sure what he was supposed to do in this sort of situation.

Jack had had enough of Daniel's sucking on pens.

"But I want this."

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"That wasn't there a minute ago."

"Don't go all Freudian on me."

There was a half-remembered joke in this, something about waking up and finding a pig wearing your pants.

[secondalto.livejournal.com]

Jack had always speculated about aliens making them do it, he'd never thought it would actually happen.

"So, naked?"

"What did you touch this time, Daniel?"

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Yay! Thank you! :-)

[lucifrix.livejournal.com]

"The only reason I'm not doing that now is because I've already waited 8 years to find out how your lips will feel on my cock."

"If you're thinking, you're taking too long."

I figured what he didn’t know wouldn’t hurt him, and prayed he never found out what I sometimes imagined when I was inside him.

"Figured if I was going to show up unannounced and uninvited I owed you a little gift."

He licked his lips and began to mouth the fabric greedily until Jack pulled him back, throbbing at the pained groan and the hungry slackness in Daniel's jaw.

"Say it again," I demanded, but he only continued to make those desperate sounds, vague pleas carried on the breath of his gasps.

"That's my boy," I whispered, "That's Daddy's good boy," and then exploded, continuing to thrust as his ecstatic cry vibrated everywhere our skin touched. [Sorry in advance for any squickage.]

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No squick worries here! One person's squick is another person's hot button. Thanks so much for these prompts!

[grasshopper64.livejournal.com]

After yet another day at the Pentagon, Jack had a suprise in store for him when he got home.

"Show me it's me and not her."

Daniel wasn't prepared for the intense feelings of what Jack was doing to him.

"You need help with that?"

"The bedroom's too far."

"You might think it's weird, disgusting even, but it's something I'd really like to try."

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Great promptage, thanks so much!

[sid]

"Make me."

"Oh, Jesus, what you do to me."

"Next time I'll expect dinner and flowers before I put out."

"Make it all go away," he begged.

Daniel looked good against Jack's rumpled sheets.

"Not in front of the squirrel!"

Jack writhed and gasped, and wondered where Daniel had learned to suck cock like that.

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Thank you for the fun yummy hot prompts! And I gotta tell ya, I have been laughing my ass off over the squirrel one for two days here. That is the best crack I've seen in a long time. *g*

[sid]

I actually have a plan for the squirrel-y prompt. ;-)

[no-eden.livejournal.com]

He thought maybe it was time to have a gay epiphany.

"Do you have a thing for guns?"

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Ooooh, weapon!porn, exxxxcellent. Thanks for the prompts! :-)

[kuonji14.livejournal.com]

Dammit, why was it always strawberry?

"Will you stop that, please?"

He knew it was sick and perverted and wrong, but he wanted this so badly.

"Elves, Daniel."

He wrinkled his nose and spluttered, "My 'sausage' does not look funny."

He loved it when it was just him and candlelight and nothing else in the whole world.

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Thanks a million for the prompts!

[kuonji14.livejournal.com]

My pleasure, believe me. I'm very curious if anyone will take me up on them and what they will write. :D

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Your "Elves, Daniel" one got used in the first entry, but the poster forgot to bold it. *g*

[kuonji14.livejournal.com]

OMG, you're right. LOL! Am so insanely amused. Thanks for putting this on. Looking forward to the rest. ;)

[theemdash]

"And that's how you do an Around-the-World."

"Exactly what about our jobs is homoerotic?"

Daniel's fingers splayed over the alien text, his touch light like a lover's.

"Being a General has its perks."

Who said she could touch him?

The water sluiced over their skin, but they hardly noticed.

The bandana was tight around Daniel's wrists; Jack wasn't playing around.

Daniel bit his lip as he admitted, "I . . . you know."

Officially, this was off the record.

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Thanks for all the prompts! Great stuff. :-)

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"I'm not quite sure that's what the aliens meant."

"I'm not watching the Simpsons until we do something I want to do."

Three months was too long to be without him.

Jack waggled his eyebrows and nodded towards the storage closet.

The note just said 0230, but Daniel knew what it meant.

"We have to drink it?" is the last thing he remembered saying.

"What happened to 'don't ask, don't tell'?"

"You retired?!"

Then Walter erased the security tape because no one needed to know. (Hee hee, you could insert other characters for Walter, but this just broke my brain.)

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I love it being Walter! Walter totally stays in the prompt. *bg*

[charmedstrange1.livejournal.com]

Do I still have time?

"I want you to love me," he whispered.

"I can't spend another ten years wishing you would anyway."

"Hurts, Jack."

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Yes, you got 'em in in time! Thank you!

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Prompts submitted after this comment posts will be held for the next challenge, but go ahead and post 'em if you got 'em, and thanks!