Here's Daniel, without a clue, first kiss. And he's barely comprehending it, but he's going along with it, though his motivations are not clear and his feelings are definitely mainly confused surprise.
I did not communicate the ambiguity well. Ah, well. That's what happens when you write something in 20 minutes before work. I'm still glad that people like it for what it is. :)
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
timeasmymeasure
Re: Grand gesture
Date: 2007-11-16 06:44 pm (UTC)This was creepier and less schmoopy in my head.
Here's Daniel, without a clue, first kiss. And he's barely comprehending it, but he's going along with it, though his motivations are not clear and his feelings are definitely mainly confused surprise.
I did not communicate the ambiguity well. Ah, well. That's what happens when you write something in 20 minutes before work. I'm still glad that people like it for what it is. :)