J/D Kissathon
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With love to all the kissing fests and memes that paved the way ...
Jack/Daniel Kissathon
No rules, no schedule, no sign-ups, just kisses!
first kisses dirty kisses hot kisses reunion kisses old-married-couple kisses chaste kisses aggressive kisses soft-touch-of-lips kisses porntastic kisses stolen kisses rough kisses sweet kisses private kisses tonsil-sucking kisses soft kisses sweaty kisses shmoopy kisses shower kisses tender kisses angsty kisses loooong kisses surprise kisses public kisses last kisses
Here's the list of ficlets.
Jack/Daniel Kissathon
No rules, no schedule, no sign-ups, just kisses!
first kisses dirty kisses hot kisses reunion kisses old-married-couple kisses chaste kisses aggressive kisses soft-touch-of-lips kisses porntastic kisses stolen kisses rough kisses sweet kisses private kisses tonsil-sucking kisses soft kisses sweaty kisses shmoopy kisses shower kisses tender kisses angsty kisses loooong kisses surprise kisses public kisses last kisses
Here's the list of ficlets.
Grand gesture
Date: 2007-11-16 01:29 pm (UTC)Obviously the fish face look didn't deter him, because now he's kissing me.
Kind of nuzzling against my bottom lip. I can't get my mouth to cooperate and my brain seems to be short-circuiting because all I seem to be able to think is he's kissing me! I'm trying to think what to do, and keep coming back to he's kissing me!
Not helpful.
He's kind of biting my lower lip. Not biting really. Just gripping it gently at the corner with his lips. I can feel the soft moist-ness of them. There should be a word for what he's doing. Nibbling? No teeth. No. Wait. Teeth now.
"Jack..."
Oh, God! Was that me. I did not intend to squeak like that.
He pulls away, a funny, sweet little smile on his face and a twinkle in his eye.
"Come on," he murmurs. MURMURS?!?!. "Plantrise. During the conjunction of the four moons. Biggest mass wedding in the universe. If there was ever a time for us, Daniel, this is it."
I'm doing the fish thing again. Which is not unexpected, since this is essentially what he said the first time, though much more poetically than the first time. The first time, before he kissed me, what he said was "We should do that!"
"That" being hold hands and walk down into the natural rock formation – well, massive, recently formed (as in the last 200 years), meteorite crater – that formed the huge outdoor amphitheater. Where every 20 years or so, when the four moons circling the planet above came into conjunction so that the other three were visible in the night sky along with the planet, there was a huge mass wedding, followed by an informal orgy where the priests officiated over orgasm contests... Getting sidetracked.
Anyway, he said, "We should do that!" as we watched two men walk down into the valley together hand-in-hand, then he took my hand, and stepped right into my personal space, like he always does, though less with the hand-holding, then he went beyond anything he has ever done before and put his other hand on my hip and pulled me in and started kissing me.
And now he's kissing me again. This time, he's going for the top lip, and he's trying to sneak in some tongue and he's warm and big and solid and in my arms and it's entirely bizarre, but in a good way, I think, and I'm not sure how I feel about this whole tongue thing, but what a cultural experience.
"Jack," I say again, and what is going on with me?! Because that was all whispery and breathy. Then I can't say anything else because that is tongue. He's eating me alive, he's everywhere, and how did my hands get in his hair.
Vaguely, far away, I hear Sam say, "About time!"
And as Jack breaks away and starts sort of shuffling me down the path into the valley, and we untangle a little so we can walk down, I hear Teal'c comment, "O'Neill is quite adept at the grand gesture."
My face is burning and my stomach is in knots and my hands are sweaty and my dick is confused. Sort of half hard, but probably trying to figure out what's making my stomach so upset.
But my lips are tingling. And Jack is grinning at me like an idiot.
And I think I'm smiling back at him.
Re: Grand gesture
Date: 2007-11-16 02:04 pm (UTC)hen he took my hand, and stepped right into my personal space, like he always does, though less with the hand-holding, I think is my favorite. And I LOVE the end.
Ahh, I'm grinning like Jack.
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Date: 2007-11-16 06:50 pm (UTC)It wasn't supposed to be sweet, dammit. It was supposed to be all creepy and WTF!!!! But it turned out this way, and I'm glad it made people smile.
Re: Grand gesture
Date: 2007-11-16 03:34 pm (UTC)give them an excuse toinspire them to do it!Love the whole thing, but my favorite line is "We should do that!" (and the set-up for it), because I can just so clearly hear that in Jack's voice.
♥ Thank you for writing one!
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Date: 2007-11-16 06:49 pm (UTC)It was my pleasure!
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Date: 2007-11-16 04:45 pm (UTC)sucksdraws the reader in nicely.oh, and they kiss
Re: Grand gesture
Date: 2007-11-16 06:46 pm (UTC)And how he is horrified/amazed by his own reactions?
As I comment to
Re: Grand gesture
Date: 2007-11-16 08:47 pm (UTC)you wrote schmoop with your subconscious! I thought that was on purpose. A gift, if you will, to balance your continuous killing of characters and creating of angst-ful situations. Remember, one of my absolute fave fanfics ever is Hunt and Peck...
Re: Grand gesture
Date: 2007-11-16 05:33 pm (UTC)Re: Grand gesture
Date: 2007-11-16 06:44 pm (UTC)This was creepier and less schmoopy in my head.
Here's Daniel, without a clue, first kiss. And he's barely comprehending it, but he's going along with it, though his motivations are not clear and his feelings are definitely mainly confused surprise.
I did not communicate the ambiguity well. Ah, well. That's what happens when you write something in 20 minutes before work. I'm still glad that people like it for what it is. :)
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Date: 2007-11-16 08:33 pm (UTC)Aw, his dick is confused, poor baby. (I don't imagine that'll last long *g*)
Re: Grand gesture
Date: 2007-11-17 11:48 am (UTC)I know! V. disturbing! :D
Aw, his dick is confused
I'm sure Jack will fix him up just as soon as the ceremony is over.
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